Thank you for sharing, Alexandre, but I see that you don't have a storyline.

I suspected that already. You have items, but you don't have a story. You make the items the story, but that is not all that much.

Allow me to create a simplistic and childish example to describe how you are missing a storyline.

When children, 6, 7, 8 years old, are investigating the question where babies come from, they will look for the babies, investigate them.

They may come up with a story, but they don't have the story as the adults know it. Whatever they come up with, there is no real story there. They will have real items, but they won't have the real story.

Silly, of course, but similarly I can see that you do not have a storyline.